← all samples · Public teardown, unsolicited, not commissioned by Clova.Email. Quotes copied from clova.email on 15 Oct 2026 (recent Show HN launch). A young product — these are suggestions, not criticism.

Clova.Email — landing page micro-audit

Format of the $19 BTC micro-audit: 3 prioritized fixes, before → after, plus 1 metric to watch.

What the page says today

“Clova.Email”

“Give every company you deal with its own email address, all in one account.”

“Three plans. That's it.”

Fix 1 (highest impact) — Hero: replace the brand-name H1 with the promise

Before: The H1 is just “Clova.Email”; the real promise sits in the meta description: “Give every company you deal with its own email address, all in one account.”

After:

“One email address per company. When one leaks, delete it — not your inbox.”

Fix 2 — CTA: one primary action

Before: The page offers “Log in / Sign up”, “Start free”, “Sign up free” and “Start now”, four labels for the same step.

After:

Use a single primary label everywhere: “Create your first address — free”.

Fix 3 — Offer: show the spam-kill moment

Before: “When one leaks or starts sending spam, delete it, not your life.” appears only in metadata.

After:

Put that line under the hero with a 3-step strip: sign up at a shop → spam arrives → delete that one address.

Metric hypothesis

If Fix 1 + 2 ship, watch hero-to-signup click-through on the first screen. for 2 weeks against the current page; hypothesis only, no data from Clova.Email.

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