← all samples · Public teardown, unsolicited, not commissioned by Jotbus. Quotes copied from jotbus.com on 15 Oct 2026 (recent Show HN launch). A young product — these are suggestions, not criticism.

Jotbus — landing page micro-audit

Format of the $19 BTC micro-audit: 3 prioritized fixes, before → after, plus 1 metric to watch.

What the page says today

“Give your coding agents a shared scratchpad.”

“Context moves between agents, not through your clipboard.”

“Try it free. Pay when you want it to stick around.”

Fix 1 (highest impact) — Hero: name the pain first

Before: “Give your coding agents a shared scratchpad.” is clear but abstract.

After:

“Stop pasting context between Claude Code and Codex.” / subline: the shared scratchpad line.

Fix 2 — CTA: one primary path

Before: “Try in your browser →”, “See how it works ↓” and “Copy npx jotbus” compete.

After:

Primary: “Copy npx jotbus” with the command visible; secondary: browser trial.

Fix 3 — Offer: price next to the free line

Before: “Try it free. Pay when you want it to stick around.” has no number nearby; $7 appears in the plan card.

After:

“Free to try · $7/mo to keep a workspace”.

Metric hypothesis

If Fix 1 + 2 ship, watch copy-command clicks per visitor. for 2 weeks against the current page; hypothesis only, no data from Jotbus.

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