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Micro-audit sample — Notion

Live URL audited: https://www.notion.com · fetched 2026-10-06 · outside eye · paste-ready ≤24h style

Snapshot (their words)

“Where teams and agents Think together.” — H1

“Capture context, find answers, and automate tasks with AI built for your team.” — hero description

“Get Notion free” — primary CTA

“Build Custom Agents, search across all your apps, and automate busywork. The AI workspace where teams get more done, faster.” — meta

3 prioritized fixes

1. Hero — priority P1

Before

Where teams and agents Think together.

After (paste-ready)

One AI workspace where your team and agents share docs, search, and tasks

Why: “Think together” is poetic but vague; buyers scan for the job (shared workspace) and the AI angle (agents on the same surface as docs).

2. CTA — priority P2

Before

Get Notion free

After (paste-ready)

Get Notion free — create your first page in 2 minutes

Why: “Get … free” is table stakes; naming the first win (create a page) cuts signup hesitation for teams evaluating yet another workspace.

3. Offer — priority P3

Before

Capture context, find answers, and automate tasks with AI built for your team.

After (paste-ready)

Docs, search across your apps, and Custom Agents in one place — so busywork runs without a new tool for every job.

Why: Keeps context/answers/automate promise but maps to concrete product claims (docs, cross-app search, Custom Agents) buyers already see in nav/meta.

Metric hypothesis

If hero + CTA + offer ship as above, hero CTA click-through → signup rises ≥9–14% over 14 days because visitors see a concrete shared-workspace job and a first-page win instead of a vague “think together” frame.

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