← all samples · Public teardown, unsolicited, not commissioned by OpenLume. Quotes copied from openlume.com on 15 Oct 2026 (recent Show HN launch). A young product — these are suggestions, not criticism.

OpenLume — landing page micro-audit

Format of the $19 BTC micro-audit: 3 prioritized fixes, before → after, plus 1 metric to watch.

What the page says today

“Ask a technical question. Get an interactive explainer video.”

“Learn with narrated visuals and code. Pause to ask follow-ups, then keep watching.”

“Free to try. No credit card required. Trusted by 3,000+ engineers.”

Fix 1 (highest impact) — Hero: cut the repeated subline

Before: Two nearly identical paragraphs under the H1 dilute the ask.

After:

Keep one subline: “Narrated video + code for your exact question — pause and ask follow-ups inside the video.”

Fix 2 — CTA: “Try an example” competes with signup

Before: Example chips are the loudest action; free trial CTA is weaker.

After:

Primary: “Ask your first question — 5 free videos”; keep examples as secondary chips.

Fix 3 — Offer: Free plan numbers conflict

Before: Hero says free / no card; FAQ says 5 tutorials free, pricing block mentions 50/month — confusing.

After:

One line under CTA: “5 free videos · no card · upgrade when you need more”.

Metric hypothesis

If Fix 1 + 2 ship, watch first-question starts and free-plan activations for 2 weeks against the current page; hypothesis only, no data from OpenLume.

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