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Micro-audit sample — Pitch

Live URL audited: https://pitch.com/ · fetched 2026-10-06 · outside eye · paste-ready ≤24h style

Snapshot (their words)

“The AI presentation workspace” — title / og:title / twitter:title

“Pitch is the collaborative presentation platform for teams that want to create, share, and deliver better work.” — meta / og:description

“Create slides that win.” — hero H1

“From prompt to presentation, 4M+ teams create and deliver winning slides together in Pitch.” — hero H2 / social proof

“Pitch is your presentation workspace” · “From first slide to final delivery, Pitch is where teams create presentations that actually land.” — why-Pitch

“From first draft to closed deal, and beyond” · “The best presentations aren’t made by just one person. In Pitch, your whole team works together to create sleek, effective slides.” — how-to

“A complete presentation toolkit” · “Years of development mean Pitch has everything fast-moving teams need to create and deliver consistently beautiful slides together…” — toolkit

“Make stunning slides” · “Pitch like a pro” · “Showcase your brand” · “Stay in control” — feature H3s

“Generate slides from your existing stack” · “Pitch is for people who mean business” · “Join 4M+ teams…” — workflows / closer

“Sign up” · “Sign up for free” · “Get a demo” · “See customer stories” — primary CTAs

“Pitch is presentation software that enables any team to quickly create beautiful decks that drive decisions.” — JSON-LD

3 prioritized fixes

1. Hero — priority P1

Why: “Create slides that win” is punchy but vague. Their own meta already sells create / share / deliver, and the H2 names 4M+ teams delivering together. Buyers comparing Pitch to Google Slides or PowerPoint need the team workspace → closed deal arc in the first line, not a slogan that could sit on any design tool.

2. CTA — priority P2

Why: “Sign up” and “Sign up for free” are near-duplicates and don’t name the first win. Their social proof is “4M+ teams create and deliver winning slides together.” One primary CTA that names a team deck makes the free path concrete; keep “Get a demo” as the secondary for buyers who want a walkthrough.

3. Offer — priority P3

Why: Keeps their create / share / deliver promise and “drive decisions” JSON-LD outcome, but names the pain (tool sprawl) and the money moment (“closed deal”) their how-to section already sells. Buyers pitch a presentation OS, not another slide editor.

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